User:Scruffy05/Petaloconchus keenae/Jtaguchi10 Peer Review

Lead
Make sure your lead includes the species description. Or introductory sentence to the species topic you are doing. Not too overly detailed, but enough to be clear and concise.

Content
Don't forget to add relevant topics to your species and their descriptions. You have missing contents I'm sure you'll add in your final draft. Make sure it is up to date and not too broad or heavily biased.

Tone and Balance
Make sure your inputted information is not heavily biased on a particular position and have neutral content. Don't repeat viewpoints. Make sure your information is not in a persuasive tone.

Organization
Be clear, concise, and easy to read, while being informative. Your references you've added seems good. You can go off of that and make sure to add in your citations in text. And add your references at the very bottom. Make sure your sections reflect the major points of those topics.

Overall impressions
Looking forward to the final draft! Good bibliography, you may add more if you need to have more information if that helps.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Scruffy05


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Scruffy05/Petaloconchus_keenae?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template