User:Scwoopy07/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Talk:2021–22 Arsenal F.C. season

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article as I am interested in soccer, and I didn't pay attention to Arsenal during their recent seasons.

Evaluate the article
The article contained no images, so there was no reference about what the article was actually referring to. In addition, the article held an unprofessional tone that talked down to the reader, allowing the tone to quickly become informal. I believe that there should be more background and context to what is being said. For example, where is Arsenal FC located and what are their values?

In addition, the background sources that were mentioned was the individuals own work, which isn't a great source, as their research was backed up by their own words. The links did work, but it would be more valuable if they led to another authors work, allowing for a more well rounded and thought out reference. I would also recommend using stronger diction, allowing for a more professional tone.

The conversations that arose around this article are non-existent, and this likely due to the fact that this article doesn't contain a lot of valuable information. This article would benefit with some more research and less biases.