User:Sdavis2023/Daniel Goleman/Amba4eva Peer Review

General info
Sdavis2023
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sdavis2023/Daniel Goleman
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Daniel Goleman

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Biography of the drafted changes looks good and reflect the individual.
 * The first paragragh in the career section of the drafted article in your sandbox needs to be completed or restructured.
 * You've made some very interesting points in the career section that will definitely captivate the eye of a reader.
 * Over all everything looks good. You've made proper references and citations.
 * Reading through the main article, I would consider fixing a few sections where citations in needed. Here is an example, "While in India, he spent time with spiritual teacher Neem Karoli Baba,[citation needed] "
 * Here is another section where citation is needed. "Goleman authored the internationally bestselling book Emotional Intelligence (Bantam Books, 1995), which spent more than a year and a half on The New York Times Best Seller list.[citation needed] "
 * I like how you made reference to his past work at the New York Times newspaper because that shed more light to the aspects of his career. in turn, eliminating content gap in that regard. Good Job!
 * You did a good job adding some of his notable books to the bibliography section for readers to see.