User:Sdavis2023/Daniel Goleman/Claireorcutt Peer Review

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Sdavis2023
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sdavis2023/Daniel Goleman - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Daniel Goleman - Wikipedia

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Excellent contributions! You did a phenomenal job adding to the "Biography" section of Daniel Goleman's article. I appreciate that you added information about the various universities he attended, as well as the topics he studied in psychology and management. I think it's also extremely significant that you included the fact that Goleman founded the Collaborative from Academic, Social, Emotion learning at Yale. Among the other organizations that Goleman founded, this is probably one of Goleman's most pivotal contributions and you did an excellent job giving a succinct explanation of its mission. Great job including references for these organizations as well.

You also did an outstanding job supplementing the career section of Daniel Goleman's article. Goleman's tenure as a journalist for the New York Times is a monumental achievement, so great job elaborating on this, as well as the meaningful contributions he made in the field of emotional intelligence. I also think it's critical that you elaborated on Goleman's book Emotional Intelligence. The illustration you include of Goleman's emotional intelligence diagram is also important for visualizing Goleman's findings in this discipline.

Overall, great contributions! You have added meaningful information that is up-to-date, relevant, neutral, organized, and free from bias. Excellent job including references for your contributions as well. Keep it up!