User:Sdeco/François-Alphonse Forel/Thearose15 Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Sdeco
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:François-Alphonse Forel

Reviewed by Theamaris Ramirez
I really liked the beginning of your page, the beginning was very interesting and caught my attention. All throughout the page, there were many sources to back up all of your information which is very credible and very easy to access. Everything that was in your article was relevant to your topic which made it easy to read and stay engaged. The article is very neutral with no bias detected in the article or the sources. All of your sources seem to back up you claims which is very good. One of the only things that I would say to change is the set up of your work. It seem to be a little choppy and not flow as well.

Overall, I think that the topic is very interesting. Remember to let your sources flow and not remain as choppy with the information. However, I think that this article was very good and represented exactly what you were trying to portray.