User:Sdesilva11/Sex industry/Axelman03 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sdesilva11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sdesilva11/Sex industry


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex industry - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I have some suggestions. I think it would be good to include on this page about gender, and how the sex industry encompasses different genders in different ways. Basically about how men are involved int he industry vs how women are involved. It would also be interesting to see how it is spread across sexualities. Like, is there a big industry for gay men? What about gay women? etc. I think questions like these would be good to include, because currently the page is somewhat limited on what it discusses. To further expand on this, it might be interesting to discuss that there is a lot of lesbian porn made for men rather than women, also a lot of gay male porn made for men, again not for women. This would be something interesting to look into. You could possibly discuss how the transgender community fits in the sex industry. Are there a lot of transgender people involved in the industry? If so, how? Obviously the topic doesn't need to be limited to sexuality and gender, but I think its a great starting point for making the page better.