User:Sdestefano/On Bullshit/DylnC Peer Review

General info
Sdestefano
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sdestefano/On Bullshit
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * On Bullshit

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft is a great introduction to this topic. The information is concise and present a fine summary of this topic's main points. Citations should be added to reinforce the information in the draft. Also, a more expansion and detailed account of Frankfurt's account could be quite beneficial to the article.