User:Sdmlas/Inoculation theory/Madnel4 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Sdmlas
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing::https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sdmlas/Inoculation_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Inoculation theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead section of the current article is too detailed. There is also few citations in the lead section for how much wording is there. It is a little roundabout and could definitely be paraphrased or reworded.

The content is currently organized similarly to a research paper. Some of the citations are not formatted for Wikipedia correctly.

The reference section is split up - I am not sure why maybe this could be something to improve.

I am confused on what proposed additions are being added based on what is in the sandbox.