User:Sdolphin02/Paradise/Zorabissell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sally


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Paradise


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Paradise

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is really well written and provides a lot of good information about references to paradise. I thought it was interesting that under the Islamic subcategory the first thing that was linked was the article to Jannah. When explaining the eight doors of Jannah I was distracted by the formatting of the words. I think that uniformity will highlight the writing rather than distract from the content provided. Under the Islamic section, the examples that are given provide further information of the topic at hand. They are well written and use good peer-reviewed sources to further strengthen the article. I think something that would strengthen that section would be linking the Wikipedia articles that give a broader overview of the example. This would just provide further information to the reader without a lot of hassle. Overall, I think the information was well-written, and adds to the quality of this article.