User:Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal/Ccadden Peer Review

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Sdreeke
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 * User:Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

-In the article draft, it would be useful to had an introductory paragraph and lead to open up each segment rather than going directly into "Sustainable Material Sourcing". The lead in each section is strong otherwise.

Content:

-The content is well put together and all relevant. Also, you did a very good job sharing the sources with specific pieces of information showing that the information is reliable and up to date. In some areas, I think you could add more detail to make it more informative and slightly longer.

Tone and Balance:

-Good job with the tone and having a neutral outlook only providing factual information. There is also strong balance in each paragraph having similar lengths and content. You could possibly look into negative aspects of certain operations, but for the most part this looks really good.

Sources and References:

-Great work adding different sources along the article to support what you have written. It is very well organized and easy to find the sources when looking for the original author. I suggest adding some source buttons lower down in the article towards the bottom paragraphs as well.

Organization:

-Organization makes sense and looks clean. I would make an introductory and closing paragraph highlighted more clearly so it is easier for the readers to find. The subheadings with bolded lettering is very effective.

Overall Impressions:

-Overall, the article looks very strong and is a great start. So far there is not much to change with the content or organization, but just needs a little bit more content, sources and images.