User:Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal/Claireava3 Peer Review

General info
Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The lead does include an introduction that is clear and concise and describes the article's topic.

- I don't think the lead gives a description of the article's major sections.

- The lead does not give information that is not in the article, just information about Indetex

- The content is relevant to the topic and is up to date considering the citations they put in.

- I think there is no content missing.

- It is neutral content, they don't give any opinions in the body paragraphs.

- No biased claims.

- I would say that the last paragraph does kind of give an opinion that Indetex is becoming more sustainable.

- Yes, the citations are reliable and up to date.

- The source do accurately relate to the content of each paragraph.

- I think that some of the sources could be a little bit biased.

- The content is well written and organized so it is easy to read.

- The sections are broken down in an organized way.

- There are no images yet.

- Yes they have 3 sources so it does meet Wikipedia's nobility requirements.

- The sources accurately represent the content but there could be more.

- The article does link to other articles in the correct places.

- Overall, I think this article is really well written and organized. I think the topic is great because it focuses on a current issue related to climate change. One thing is that I think it can be a little persuasive and biased when saying that Indetex is becoming more sustainable. I don't think it is a huge issue but maybe there can be some more sources about how the company operates without discussing their steps to becoming more sustainable.