User:Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal/Etjone25 Peer Review

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Sdreeke
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 * User:Sdreeke/Indetex's implementation of the European Green Deal
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The lead into the article is very concise but slightly vague on what will be examined further in the article. Slightly more detail/background on Inditex might be helpful in some part of the article to get better understanding of the company.

The content of the article is very easy to read and broken into good sections that focus on a specific topic that leads into the next section. No image use but not 100% needed to gain good understanding of topic. Maybe the inclusion of what Inditex store might look like? Just for visual. One error grammatically is just the spelling of Inditex in article compared to it being Indetex in the article title.

Article gives good background on what European Green Deal standards Inditex is following but maybe a little background on what the Green Deal is could be helpful to understanding its importance and relevance to this company's initiative.

Maybe could talk about how Iditex's sustainability initiative is influencing other brands if it is?