User:Se2032/Nantahala National Forest/Turnwaldm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Se2032


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Se2032/Nantahala National Forest


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nantahala National Forest

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead Section- I think your overview sentence is a quality addition to the overview thats already on the article page. I think if you're trying to rearrange the whole article, your best option for the overview section may be to copy and paste the current overview and edit and add your new sentences from there. I think if you incorporate some of the original overview, the information will be a good brief overview of the topic.

Content- I think you have a good start for the content. Be sure to diversify your sources a bit more, but besides that I think you can stay on the same track. The article is an underrepresented topic and I actually reference this page a couple times in my article (Richland Balsam)

Tone and Balance- I think your writing so far does a very good job of staying objective and neutral.

Sources and References- Your sources appear to be reliable, and so far your information matches the content of the sources. Some of the sources are slightly dated, but that shouldn't be a problem since its not that contemporary of an article. I think a site that may help you is the National Parks Services Website. Your links function well, but I think you should start taking your references and making them into actual citations with the citations generator. That might help your organization as you add more content so you don't forget which source something was from.

Organization- Your organization makes sense, but if you click on the word paragraph on the top ribbon you can make your section headings into actual headings.

Images and Media- No pictures included. I don't think anymore pictures are needed, the current page has quite a few.