User:Seahorseswimming/Josh Gad/Hayward 24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seahorseswimming


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Seahorseswimming/Josh_Gad?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Josh Gad

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading the article of the writer and reading the article on Josh Gad I do believe the line that the writer was intending to incorporate into the article will in fact be useful to the article. I believe that talking about his mental disorders it may in fact provide extra understanding of the life of Josh Gad. With that being said I believe that with that article I suspect that there probably is additional information that could be added that the writer may not have yet noticed due to use of one sentence. Overall the writer did in fact use a creditable source that has provided him with useful information.