User:SealSquared/Civic technology/Wafflehouse777 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SealSquared


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SealSquared/Civic_technology/Wafflehouse777_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Civic technology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Since the author is contributing more content, specifically on civic technology applications in various countries, it is best to follow the original article's format. which essentially describes how civic technology relates to that specific country and lays out various initiatives from both government and citizens. Additionally, as a separate main idea, discussing how civic technology has influenced public discourse and, possibly, how governments have responded to it would be an interesting addition. Overall, the tone of the draft is neutral, and the author appears to have the fundamental ideas needed to move forward.

Reply
Thank you for the feedback. I'll try to find articles discussing how these platforms have made impacts and influences in their community.