User:Sean.dempsey1231/Evaluate an Article

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Talk:Josh Giddey

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I wanted to evaluate this article because I am an NBA fan and remember this occasion about Josh Giddey coming out. There was a lot of confusion of what the charges were and what would happen to him.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article has an introductory sentence and dives right into what happened with NBA player Josh Giddey with accusations of him hooking up with an underage girl. The lead is relatively concise and touches over a lot of the important details. In this article there is plenty of information that is missing like the name of the girl, where it occurred, and the steps taken by the NBA and the Thunder after the social media post was posted. I would like to see more specific information that is up to date and you can find a more detailed description of Josh and the case on other websites. Then article is written in a neutral tone, because this a topic that many people wouldn't be "biased" on. There are sources cited in this piece that back up with is written in the article.There are much better sources that could be used from larger news outlets and media organizations. The article is well written, and there aren't many images besides the one at the top of the page. Overall it gives a brief overview of Giddy as a player and that something happened to him with an underage girl. However, I wish more details were given about the steps taken after the pictures and videos circulated the internet.