User:Sean.dempsey1231/Trexx Bar/Miloshi525 Peer Review

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Sea.dempsey1231 & Annikaholmberg
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Overall, this draft is great! I would remove the 'History of Clinton Square' and 'History of Gay Bars in the United States' sections just because there are already pre-existing articles. Maybe talking about the atmosphere of the club or adding that it's 18+ since there are very few clubs like that.

An events section talking about the different events the club hosts and their impact on inclusivity would fit into the article.