User:Seaoli12oceans12/Brucella canis/Hart Hequembourg Peer Review

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Article: Brucella canis Your first paragraph has a lot of good info and doesn't seem biased which is good. I think you can add more about what specifically the article will address in later sections. In the Morphology section you could go into a lot more explanation about what each of those descriptive terms means because someone with no previous knowledge about the morphology of microbes would be very confused.You could also add more photos to the article. The edit you made to the history section looks good. Hart Hequembourg (talk) 17:48, 6 October 2022 (UTC)