User:Seaoli12oceans12/Brucella canis/Loganhardin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seaoli12oceans12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Seaoli12oceans12/Brucella_canis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brucella canis
 * Brucella canis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction had a lot of great background information about the microbe including the shape and what kind of microbe it is. I would expand the introduction to talk more about why the microbe matters in a larger context/add information on its history. The information provided was neutral and well spoken. The infection section had a lot of great detail that was very interesting. I would add some images as well in order for the reader to better understand the topic. Overall, this is a great start!