User:Seaoli12oceans12/Brucella canis/Young416 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seaoli12oceans12, Mfavro, Walker16


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Seaoli12oceans12/Brucella_canis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brucella canis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brucella canis
 * Brucella canis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the article editing is off to a great start. The information that has been added in the "History" section is a great edition. However, it doesn't necessarily seem appropriate to include this information in the "History" section since it talks about more recent research relating to PCR. It might be a good idea to add an additional section on recent research on this microbe. In addition, the "Host range" section is very limited. It mentions infections in foxes and coyotes, but no additional information is given on infection in these animals. Consider conducting further research to add more detail on this topic. I would also suggest adding more images to the article that support the text, as there is currently only one image in the article.