User:Seasloth/Archaeomythology/BannyBavito222 Peer Review

Peer review
Whose work are you reviewing?

Seasloth

Link to draft you’re reviewing

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Archaeomythology

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Does not exist yet

My comments:

There is so substantial edits made that I can comment on. The original article itself has only 1 paragraph. This would make a good lead paragraph once there is more information added in. In order to make this article better would to add in some sub paragraphs as well with subtitles. This can dig deeper in on your topic and also create an organized article that makes it easier for viewers to read and understand. The resources in this students bibliography are pretty reliable it looks like, as they all seem to be from a good source and there are three different ones for more information and diversity of information. BannyBavito222 (talk) 19:07, 27 March 2023 (UTC)