User:Seastandbymeblackeye/Daisy Jones & The Six (book)/Cirith Ninniach Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seastandbymeblackeye


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Seastandbymeblackeye/Daisy Jones & The Six (book) - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: this looks good; very concise.

Content: the plot summary is good so far but needs to be finished.

Tone and Balance: the tone is neutral and does not try to convince the reader of a particular viewpoint.

Sources and References: formatted nicely, and there are plenty of reliable sources.

Organization: the organization makes sense; there isn't anything I would change.

Overall, this is an informative and organized article. My main suggestion is to check the grammar and wording in the plot summary section, since there are places where the wording is confusing. The plot summary seems to be unfinished, but other than that there are no major issues. Great job!