User:Seattleair/Stirrup spout vessel/BeeCandelaria Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seattleair


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Stirrup spout vessel


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

This lead is has everything EXCEPT what these were used for. These vessels have a very interesting form, and it would be nice to know what their function is before you delve into the nitty gritty.

Content

There's some unnecessary buildup under the Moche. I'm sure that the Moche have their own Wikipedia, which means that this is can be deleted. It will allow the article to focus more on the actual stirrup spout vessels. This entire article delineates from this particular kind of vessel. Also, the lead mentions that the Chavin also use this type of vessel, but there is no section with the Chavin mentioned. Adding a section about how the Chavin used this vessel would complete the article.