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Potential Wikipedia Target Article: Treatment-resistant depression
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Cochrane Review Name: Psychological Therapies for Treatment-Resistant Depression in adults.

Cochrane Review (PMID): PMID: 29761488

Conclusions (paraphrased in your own words, in lay language): If people who don't get better on antidepressant medication are also given talking therapy, they are more likely to feel better and have their depression go away entirely. This benefit seems to last to the long-term.

Hi can you please review my proposed edit?


 * Hi, this looks great. One suggestion is to add the citation after every sentence. Because Wikipedia articles are "patched" together with many different editors/contributors, we generally try to cite every sentence. You can add multiple citations by clicking "re-use" in the citation tool and looking for your citation again. If you are using the source-based editing platform, you can do this manually and quickly by naming your citation.

e.g: Example of 2nd use of citation. I re-named your citation with the first author last name+ year of publication, no spaces. I like your use of "lay language, easy to understand.
 * JenOttawa (talk) 13:10, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Do you want to try to add a "wiki-link" to talking therapy in your above sentence? This links the term to another Wikipedia article for those who are not familiar with what it is. While editing, you can highlight your term and click the "link" to search. In this case talking therapy is a re-direct to psychotherapy, but that is fine. JenOttawa (talk) 13:13, 11 June 2018 (UTC)

3rd session notes:
The below segment is to use in class tomorrow. Thanks!JenOttawa (talk) 02:42, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

Medications
When influenza outbreaks occur, medications such as amantadine or rimantadine may be efficacious; however they are associated with adverse effects. A 2014 Cochrane Review concluded that Zanamivir or oseltamivir treatment decreases the chance that those exposed will develop symptoms; however, it is recommended that potential side effects are taken into account before prescribing to patients.