User:Seburr/Elsie Widdowson/Gcoale Peer Review

General info
Seburr
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Skidmore_College/Physics_and_Society_(Spring_2024)/articles/edited?showArticle=655158945
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Elsie Widdowson

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The changes so far look great! I'm curious to know what prizes and scholarships she was awarded in her early career at the grammar school she attended. I love that you provided the context surrounding why she first decided to go into dietetics. The content you have added definitely has improved the article! The new content is placed in the appropriate sections, the tone flows with the rest of the article, and the lead is clear and concise.