User:Seburr/Elsie Widdowson/NapoleonKreka Peer Review

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Seburr
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Elsie Widdowson - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Elsie Widdowson - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You made a good number of edits to the article, rewording things. The article itself has a large number of good references that are well cited in the article. The article has a large amount of material, and the subsections share an even weight. There does seem like some material in the early life and mccance sections that could be put into an education section, but it is up to your discretion on whether that is appropriate because it looks like she stayed in academia for most of her life.