User:Sedvabs/Iznik pottery/A702506 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added to this article provides a comprehensive overview of Iznik pottery by covering the history as well as the evolution of designs over the years. The tone throughout the article additions is informative and provides the reader with ample amounts of information to go through. There is no direct bias in the writing and the references used are solid. The article is informative however adding more vivid descriptions or anecdotes could improve the integrity of the article. The material is very well written and greatly improves the overall quality of the article. Some improvements can be made adding in the citations needed but overall the article provides valuable information that will benefit the strength of the article.