User:Seeley32/Pinky (dolphin)/AveryMcC Peer Review

Hi Anne,
I love dolphins! I believe I have seen a picture of Pinky before, but didn't realize she had a name. Are pink dolphins super rare? I think you lead with a great first few sentences, but I think you could add a bit more so that people get a better idea of what the article is going to consist of. The part about why she is pink is very interesting and adds some scientific repertoire into the piece. It is a neutral article and a great start to something that I think can be great. I would love to know more so definitely add some more info and maybe some more on sightings of Pinky. I think you can find some more sources that will help add some depth to this article. Thanks for your hard work!

Avery McClanahan