User:SeenaBerkeley/Swing Left/Malak8462000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SeenaBerkeley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Swing Left

Evaluate the drafted changes
This wikipedia page is filled with the basic information anyone needs to understand what Swing Left is and what it represents. I enjoyed the fact that the whole page had a neutral tone. I also liked how for some of the words that I wouldn't have known, they were linked to another wikipedia page that explained what it was. The one thing that could be improved is the amount of information present. There was only one heading with less than 4 paragraphs of information. Maybe the editor could add another heading that has to do with current accomplishments or something along those lines and then have the introduction have less information on what Swing Left has accomplished and more on just basic information like who created it and when and if they are for profit or non profit. Overall, all the information was constantly cited in the correct way which was a positive.