User:Sefran2

I am a Psychology major from Hibbing, Minnesota. I am going to graduate in December with a degree in Psychology and English. I am interested to be able to help edit Wiki pages with knowledgable information.

Wikipedia Assignment 4
'''Maybe I should have been more specific on the assignment. I said: "Each member should add the following to your group's sandbox." I meant that each group member should submit 1 problem, two references, and 2 questions/comments for me. Since I am so late getting to this assignment, I won't penalize you. In the future, please read instructions carefully and ask me if something seems ambiguous.'''

Thanks, Dr. Council


 * Would you like us to correct this issue? Isley Pie6 (talk) 19:36, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

For the Wikipedia assignment 4 Cydney is going to come up with two sources for our topic of Beverly Greene and Savannah will be asking the two questions.

Our Issue

 * The Wikipedia page for Beverly Greene does not exist. Not having a page for Beverly Greene is our biggest issue.

Questions

 * Our first question would be how many sources should we have on the Wikipedia page that we are going to create?

'''If there are lots of references, use enough to tell the story and don't pad. If there are only a few references, use them all. Between these, extremes, use your judgment.'''03:41, 7 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Our second question is what advice would you have in creating a new page?

'''It is very easy. You just change the article in your sandbox to a public page, using the Move button. ''' J.R. Council (talk) 03:41, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Isley Pie6 (talk) 19:09, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

To Do List

 * Find as many relevant sources to use for Beverly Greene to create her page.
 * Map out how the page will be
 * Add information as we find it
 * Review page for detail, spelling or grammatical errors

What article will look like
'' Beverly Greene is a clinical and research psychologist who specializes in "institutionalized racism, sexism, heterosexism and other oppressive ideologies in the paradigms of psychology and practice of psychotherapy in organized mental health," according to St. John's University faculty page. She currently works there, however, that is not where she began he college career. She started out at New York University where she got her bachelors degree. From there she went to Derner Institute of Advanced Psychological Studies, Adelphi Uniiversity for clinical psychology. That is where she earned her Masters and Ph.D.
 * History and Background

'' She has written many articles that have made an impact on psychology today. (I will be looking into this to find out exactly how many and when they came about. )
 * Contributions to Psychology

''Beverly Greene currently teaches Psychology courses at St. John's University. Her research focuses on (Again we are going to read articles and elaborate on this.)
 * What her research entails

'' https://www.stjohns.edu/academics/bio/beverly-greene </ref
 * References

I will be working on what her contributions to psychology are. Cydney will work on what her research entails. sefran2 (talk) 22:36, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

To Do List

 * Make sure we are finding relevant and credible sources
 * We will need to find various pictures to go along with our article as well as videos (if necessary)
 * type Help:Pictures in searchbox for instructions. You need to make sure pictures are in the public domain, or else get permission. J.R. Council (talk) 20:02, 28 March 2018 (UTC)


 * As we are adding information, we need to make sure that we are keeping things organized so that our article is easy to follow. We need to keep in mind the appearance of the article
 * We need to make sure that we stay on schedule with adding information
 * We need to make sure that we are looking at comments/suggestions that are being left for us

Outline
(I wasn't sure if I needed to do this part yet since the leading section will be assignment 6 so I left this part out for now!) Beverly Green has received her Bachelors in Psychology at New York University in 1973. Greene received her Masters in Clinical Psychology at Derner Institute of Advanced Psychological Studies, Adelphi University in 1977. Greene went on to receive her Ph.D. in Clinical Psychology at Derner Institute of Advanced Psychological Studies, Adelphi University in 1983. Beverly Greene has made sure to point out that psychology can be political. She looks at institutionalized racism, sexism, and heterosexism and examines how it relates back to psychology and the practice of psychotherapy in organized mental health. Green also looks at social privilege and marginalization and how psychotherapy and psychological science can be used to facilitate social justice. Greene would like to help people understand psychological resilience and vulnerability when it comes to psychotherapy. http://dx.doi.org/10.1037/0022-006X.62.2.243
 * Leading Section
 * Biography
 * Education
 * Contributions to Psychology
 * Works
 * Greene, B. & Brodbar, D. (Eds.).(2010). A minyan of women: Family dynamics, Jewish identity, and psychotherapy practice. Philadelphia, PA: Routledge.
 * Greene, B. (2008). African American women, spirituality and psychotherapy:  The use and abuse of religion/spirituality.  In  C. Rayburn & L. Comas Diaz (Eds.)., Woman Soul: Women & Spirituality. Westport, CT: Praeger Publications.
 * Greene, B. (2008). African American lesbians and gay men.  In  H. Neville (Ed.)., The Psychology of African Americans: A Handbook.  Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage Publications.
 * Greene, B. (2005). Psychology, cultural diversity & social justice: Beyond heterosexism and across the cultural divide. Journal of Counseling Psychology Quarterly.
 * Greene, B., & Croom, G. L. (Eds.). (2000). Psychological perspectives on lesbian, gay and bisexual issues Vol.  5: Education, Practice and Research in Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual and Transgendered Psychology: A Resource Manual.  Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage Publications.
 * Jackson, L. C., & Greene, B. A.  (Eds.). (2000).  Psychotherapy with African American women: Innovations in psychodynamic perspectives and practice.  New York: Guilford Press.
 * Greene, B. (Ed.). (1997). Psychological perspectives on lesbian and gay issues Vol. 3: Ethnic and cultural diversity among lesbians and gay men. Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage.
 * Greene, B. (1995). African American Families: A legacy of vulnerability and resilience. National Forum: Phi Kappa Phi Journal.
 * Greene, B. (1994). Ethnic minority lesbians and gay men: Mental health and treatment issues. Journal of Consulting & Clinical Psychology.
 * Greene, B. (1993).  Psychotherapy with African American women: Integrating feminist and psychodynamic models. Journal of Training and Practice in Professional Psychology.
 * Greene, B. (1986).  When the therapist is white and the patient is Black: Considerations for psychotherapy in the feminist heterosexual and lesbian communities. Women & Therapy.
 * References
 * Greene, B. (1994). African American women. In L. Comas-Díaz & B. Greene (Eds.), Women of color: Integrating ethnic and gender identities in psychotherapy (pp. 10-29). New York, NY, US: Guilford Press.
 * Greene, B. (1994). Ethnic-minority lesbians and gay men: Mental health and treatment issues. Journal of Consulting and Clinical Psychology, 62(2), 243-251.


 * Chewinski, M. (n.d.). Profile. https://www.feministvoices.com/beverly-greene/
 * Greene, B., & Brodbar, D. (2011). A minyan of women: family dynamics, Jewish identity and psychotherapy practice. London: Routledge.
 * Pope, K. S., Sonne, J. L., & Greene, B. (2008). What therapists don't talk about and why: understanding taboos that hurt us and our clients. Washington, DC: American Psychological Assoc.

I will be working on what Beverly Greene's research entails and Savannah will be working on what her contributions to psychology are. We will be splitting the work into the history and background section (the biography section) as well as the reference section. Si- nce Beverly Green has publications, Savannah and I will be splitting that section up as well (the works section). We will also be working on the introduction section together. We will work to find and add pictures and videos together as well as continuously edit our article and make sure it stays organized. Isley Pie6 (talk) 14:12, 21 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Nice job on this, you two! I can see you're learning to format. My main suggestion is that you combine the separate outlines into one. It will make it easier to write the article. You seem to have plenty of material for a good Wikipedia article. J.R. Council (talk)

=Leads=

First of all, the assignment instructions say to do this in the sandbox. Comment on the sandbox talk page. So please move these to the right locations. J.R. Council (talk) 19:22, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Lead Section- Savannah Franklin
Beverly Greene grew up in an environment where she was allowed to question things in the world and search for the why in everything. He parents wanted her to think outside the box. She became interested in how people became who they are and how to use that information. This was the start of her studies. She became of aware of the complexity of the human brain and wanted to know more. She started out at New York University where she graduated with her bachelor's degree in psychology in 1973. This is really where she began to flourish and get intrigued by feminism and how this ties in with psychology. After that, she moved on to Demer Institute, Adelphi University where she got her Master Degree in 1977 and PhD in 1983 in Clinical psychology, Green has done a lot of work within feminist psychology where she primarily works with people who marginalized for their race, class, gender and sexual orientation.

She found that the feminist groups were more interested in hearing her ideas about why people are marginalized and what can be done to help stop the epidemic. Her core beliefs are that psychology needs to grow to understand that racism is very much alive and that we need to focus on women from different cultures according to www.feministvoices.com. She has written many articles on research that she has done, some which date back to 1993. Her last article was in 2010. She currently teaches psychology classes at St. Johns University. She started there in 1991. sefran2 (talk) 22:41, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments: ''This is good, but more suitable for the main body of the article than the lead. It is written like you're telling a story. The details about upbringing and education should go in the main body. Start the lead by establishing her notability. First of all, say who she is, an African American psychologist. Then describe her notable accomplishments, books she's written, important research, etc. Be specific.'' J.R. Council (talk) 19:27, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Lead Section- Cydney Coffey
Beverly Greene is a clinical psychologist who specializes in the role of institutionalized racism, sexism, heterosexism and other oppressive ideologies in psychology and psychotherapy in mental health. As a clinical psychologist, Greene strives to understand psychological resilience and vulnerability in socially marginalized people and how that relates to psychotherapy. In order to understand the human identity, Green examines social privilege and uses psychological science and psychotherapy to further look at social justice. Beverly Greene has made it a point to make sure that people know that psychology can be political.

Beverly Greene is currently teaching undergraduate and graduate courses at St. John's University in Queens, New York. In order to get to where she is, Greene received her Bachelors in Psychology at New York University in 1973. She went on to receive her Masters in Clinical Psychology at Derner Institute of Advanced Psychological Studies, Adelphi University in 1977. Going further, Greene went on to receive her Ph.D. in Clinical Psychology at Derner Institute of Advanced Psychological Studies, Adelphi University in 1983. Throughout Greene's career, she has written a tremendous about of publications. In addition to her publications, Greene also has a substantial amount of professional honors and awards. She has served in many leadership positions where she has been able to reciprocate and expand her knowledge immensely. She works to broaden the focus of psychology in hopes that psychology can work to understand women from other cultures and their experiences. Ever since Greene became a psychologist, there have been countless advances when it comes to understanding those who are marginalized. Greene aimed to make those people who were marginalized because of their race, class, gender, and sexual orientation visible to the world. She has been successful in doing so and has worked continuously to make sure that people are aware that racism and discrimination still very much exist. Isley Pie6 (talk) 12:42, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments: ''The first paragraph could almost stand alone as the lead. The second paragraph should go in the main body of the article. In the lead, you should mention some specific notable achievements, like books, articles, or research. J.R. Council (talk) 19:34, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Wikipedia Assignment 7
Savannah and I put both of our lead sections into a Google Doc so that we could work together to edit and combine our lead sections. We both felt that it was a success and below is what we came up with! We hope you like it!

Combined Lead Section
Beverly Greene grew up in an environment where she was allowed to question things in the world and search for the why in everything. Her parents wanted her to think outside the box. Greene became a clinical psychologist who strives to understand psychological resilience and vulnerability in socially marginalized people and how that relates to psychotherapy. In order to understand the human identity, Green examines social privilege and uses psychological science and psychotherapy to further look at social justice. Greene has made it a point to make sure that people know that psychology can be political. She became of aware of the complexity of the human brain and wanted to know more. She became interested in how people became who they are and how to use that information. This was the start of her studies.

Beverly Greene started out at New York University where she received her Bachelor’s in Psychology in 1973. This is really where she began to flourish and get intrigued by feminism and how this ties in with psychology. She then went on to receive her Masters in Clinical Psychology at Derner Institute of Advanced Psychological Studies, Adelphi University in 1977. Going further, Greene went on to receive her Ph.D. in Clinical Psychology at Derner Institute of Advanced Psychological Studies, Adelphi University in 1983. Since 1991 Greene has been teaching undergraduate and graduate courses at St. John's University in Queens, New York.

Greene has made remarkable strides in the psychology field by writing many research papers entailing the work she has done with psychology. She has a tremendous amount of publications, some which date back to 1993. Her last article was in 2010. In addition to her publications, Greene also has a substantial amount of professional honors and awards. She has served in many leadership positions where she has been able to reciprocate and expand her knowledge immensely. Greene has found that the feminist groups were more interested in hearing her ideas about why people are marginalized and what can be done to help stop the epidemic. Green has done a lot of work within feminist psychology where she primarily works with people who marginalized for their race, class, gender and sexual orientation. She works to broaden the focus of psychology in hopes that psychology can work to understand women from other cultures and their experiences. Ever since Greene became a psychologist, there have been countless advances when it comes to understanding those who are marginalized. Greene aimed to make those people who were marginalized because of their race, class, gender, and sexual orientation visible to the world. Her core beliefs are that psychology needs to grow to understand that racism is very much alive and that we need to focus on women from different cultures. She has been successful in doing so and has worked continuously to make sure that people are aware that racism and discrimination still very much exist. Isley Pie6 (talk) 03:10, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's feedback: still not ready
This has not been signed, so I don't know who put it together. However, it still doesn't work as a lead. You should not telling a story, but conveying information. Establish her notability in the first sentence. You also need to make specific statements and back them up with references. Much of the material you edit out of the lead can go in the main text. J.R. Council (talk) 19:40, 20 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Sorry, we had it in the wrong place on Wikipedia at first so I switched it over and forgot to sign it! It was done on time though! I also didn't realize that we had to have it revised already? I thought that it needed to be revised for you to look at for assignment 8? We are working on it now though, working on revising it so there shouldn't be any worries there!
 * Do you mean that we need to make specific statements and back them up with references in the lead? I thought we only needed to do that in the main text? Isley Pie6 (talk) 03:10, 21 April 2018 (UTC)