User:Seganey/Art therapy/Amonroyr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seganey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing Editing User:Seganey/Art therapy - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Art therapy - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Art therapy - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
lead - By adding content on the definition of art therapy, it helped us to better understand the goal of art therapy.

content, tone, and balance

- the content added is relevant and up to date

- There is a neutral tone used in this post

sources, references, and organization

- all links to the sources work and are up to date

- the content that has been added is well organized and concise

overall impression

- You have clearly defined art therapy and the benefits it gives to those with dementia. I would suggest looking at the section on outsider art and adding a clearer definition of what outsider art is. Furthermore, it is useful to point out how this contradicts the claim that art therapy is not about aesthetics. Instead, it is to better understand a patient's emotions through art, regardless of whether it is pleasing to the eye. What makes this section relevant to the topic of art therapy? this is the question that I would like you to think about with this specific section. From my understanding of it, I do not see the relevance to the overall topic. One last thing the correct references at the bottom of your sandbox should be moved to the actual section "references" the ones you currently have under that section are not correct.