User:Seganey/Art therapy/Emjo2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seganey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Art therapy
 * Art therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see some good information here, and my suggestion is to leave out the quotation marks and work in some paraphrasing. Your sources are relatively recent, but I do not think it would hurt to add in a few from the past three years. If you are interested, I think that another section could be added about Art Therapy and telehealth, as it has become a widely used form of healthcare in the past few years! This could help you identify some underserved populations that may be important to touch on as well. I also noticed that your second and third in-text citation links to the same article, so I would recommend checking in on your links to make sure that they are correct. Keep up the good work!