User:Seganey/Art therapy/Phrenic490 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seganey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Art therapy
 * Art therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
I personally think there are multiple different ways this article could be improved. For example, it briefly describes how art therapy is helpful for people with ASD, but does not go into the way this is actually applied to individuals. I would be interested in reading about the different ways that people with ASD use art therapy and the various benefits it has for them, and why. I was also interested in the bottom section discussing Outsider Art, which is a topic that has always interested me personally. I think examples would be informative, both with names and pictures as well as how these individuals have described their art being helpful for them and possibly a scientific explanation behind these discussions.