User:Selena48/Eliot Hall (Reed College)/Cobler Rose Peer Review

Hi Selena48, I’m Cadie Vespermann, a classmate in the Medieval Portland capstone. I think you have a great start to you Wiki article. I appreciate all the hard work you must have done to uncover all that history. I think your lead is clear and concise, and serves as a great intro to your topic. You provide a lot of great detail about your building and I was thinking that it might be good to clarify which architectural elements were Tudor Gothic and Collegiate Gothic. I was also wondering why the building was renamed after Thomas Lamb Eliot. Who was he to the university? I have to say, writing an article from scratch must be quite the undertaking, well done! ~Cobler Rose