User:Selena AHIS320/María Clara/Rhiannongro Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SelenaAHIS320


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:María Clara
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * María Clara

Evaluate the drafted changes
From this short segment that Im sure will become a lengthy and full body of writing, I see that this article is well written and concise. My feedback thus far would be to start off the paragraph under the title "Creation of the feminine ideal," with a description of "The feminine ideal" before you go into the creation of it. It might also be interesting to go into the current discourse that Maria Clara as a "feminine ideal" has brought up?