User:Selena AHIS320/Women in the Philippines/Celinebean2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Selena AHIS320


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Selena AHIS320/Women in the Philippines


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women in the Philippines

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Hi Selena, your writing is very concise and easy for me to read while at the same time very informative and interesting. It's great that you were able to paraphrase so much instead of using too many quotes. I like that you added a lot of of wikilinks to the other topics that are brought up. Although this topic could easily be biased in criticizing colonization, I think you did a great job in keeping it unbiased.