User:Selena AHIS320/Women in the Philippines/Deemodango Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Selena AHIS320


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Selena AHIS320/Women in the Philippines


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women in the Philippines

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far I see the sections you plan on adding and it looks like you have a lot planned for the article. You mentioned that "Babaylan" doesn't seem to fit much into this section but reading the short sentence you have on what it's about sounds like it'll be a very interesting addition. Maybe you can consider starting a separate page for this topic if you feel like it doesn't fit? Though I don't mind it being there

Anyways, I'm looking forward to see your finished article!