User:Sellersj22/Daniel Warren Johnson/RobmDav Peer Review

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After reading through your Wiki article I think that maybe instead of "lead" as a header you should do like "personal life" or "early life" or something along those lines? I know you have a bunch of info on Johnson's comic work but I was also wondering if there was anything else about his personal life you could include? Does he have any family? Was he born in Chicago or elsewhere? Is there a birthdate for him? I know it may all be almost impossible to find, and ultimately may not fit but it would be some info to flesh out the first section if you were after that. I know we already talked in person about how difficult it is to find the information and it may not be verifiable or even exist but I wanted to double check as well.

I like all your info about his career, how it doesn't jump around at all and it is easy to follow. You have all the hyperlinks to the other pages pages already embedded as well which is nice too. I think it is well written and easy to understand. Great read and well done!

R