User:Semaj Martin/Sterilization of Latinas/Equijas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Drojasaar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Semaj%20Martin/Sterilization_of_Latinas?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead is reflects new content added. It is concise and describes what the body of the article will be about. The underlined sentence clearly states that the article will be about Mexican sterilizations in California. I suggest adding at least two more sentences to the lead to make it stronger.

Content

The content added is relevant to the article and up to date. The content flows well with the category where it was added. The article is ideal because it includes an under-representative minority group, Mexicans.

Tone and Balance

The content added is neutral, it does not include personal thoughts or opinions. It is not intended to persuade the reader to one side over another because it includes real facts and information.

Sources and References

The article is backed up by reliable information from various sources at the bottom. It cites all sources. Sources are current and diverse. I click a few and they work.

Organization

The article is well written by categories. it is clear and easy to understand. It is well organized and broken down by subject.

Images and Media

The article does not contain any images or media yet.

Overall Impression

The new information added will help the readers understand the laws about sterilization and the impact it had on the victims lives. I really like that she included one of the woman's own words in the article. This article shows the racism and discrimination that Mexicans went through years ago and sadly, it still continues nowadays.