User:Semaj Martin/Sterilization of Latinas/Lorozco3 Peer Review

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semaj martin


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 * Sterilization of Latinas

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Content is clear but can use some work on language relating to a biased perspective. Adjectives relating to severity of situation should not be mentioned. Good number of sources. More should be added on the individuals and examples. More should be written on politicians and their roles in the passing of laws. Some sentences need citations