User:Semaj Martin/Sterilization of Latinas/Tinosherwood Peer Review

General info

 * Semaj Martin

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sterilization of Latinas

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

In the lead section of my peers article there is a variety of new information that is added and the introductory sentence concisely and clearly describes the articles main topic. My peer did a great job by including some definitions that provide background information on the topic however I feel that there is room for improvement in terms of covering other major sections that this article will consist of. Finally in terms of the lead I believe my peer could add some more citations to support the percentages that are used in the lead.

Content

One of the strongest factors of my peers article is that it addresses a topic that is related to both underrepresented populations and topics.

Tone and Balance

The additions to this article that were made by my peer are very balanced yet straight forward. Both the information and the tone in which it is provided are neutral and fit the Wikipedia guidelines. I think that the idea of Puerto Rico may be slightly overrepresented, however I do not see this as a bad thing. In order to make this information more fitting I would simply suggest specifying Puerto Rico in some of the headers.

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