User:Semianduzi/Napoleon Avenue/Amberzsimmo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Semianduzi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Semianduzi/Napoleon Avenue
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
the article feels more like a glowing review of the neighborhood, so it doesn't feel nurtural, however it is very well written. the sections are not clearly divided, so I had to figure out by reading closely to understand if I was reading a new section of the article or if the new paragraph was a continuation. the fifth paragraph isn't necessary, and gives the article more of a paper feeling, than a neutral Wiki article. there are no sources listed. though it doesn't fit into the criteria given by the peer review template, this article will be very detailed and insightful once done the way Wiki requires it. I enjoyed this article as it had a lot of details the others did not, and I found that interesting.