User:Semianduzi/Napoleon Avenue/MHD2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Semianduz


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 * User:Semianduzi/Napoleon Avenue


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article seems to have much information regarding the street. The lead section is very concise and detailed on the location of Napoleon Avenue in relation to other streets. However, I think you should add that it is located in the Uptown District in New Orleans, Louisiana. The part when you say that "there no need to guess where this street got it's name from" is redundant and you can just take it out. You can also include a sentence in your lead about what Napoleon Avenue is known for. I also think that the paragraph starting with "Culture is shared" is redundant because it does not pertain to the street you are writing about. You could instead try to elaborate more on the features of Napoleon Avenue and what people do there. I like that the content in your article is neutral. It presents information without showing bias. The information is also easy to read because they are sectioned off into paragraphs. However, I think you can add headings to each section of your article. For example, you can have a section about the housing and residential life and another section on the culture of the people living on this street. The article does not contain any citations or references, so those should be added accordingly. You can also try to find a picture of Napoleon Avenue that follows Wikipedia's rules. Overall, I think the information on your article is a good foundation.