User:Sepidehmsh/CLUE model/Pegahabdolkarimi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sepidehmsh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sepidehmsh/CLUE_model?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * User: Sepidehmsh/CLUEmodel
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Choosing the model is a smart idea. The content of the article is clear, neutral, easy to read and related to the topic. I recommend adding a picture to your article, if applicable. It will improve the visualization understanding. It is a great idea that you have a section mentioning the examples of model applications. It provides readers with more information related to the topic and better understanding. The heading are well-prepared. Also, I believe that the last section (CLUE scanner) can be more elaborated and more examples can be given. The citations and references are well-organized and all the up-dated literature is backed up by an appropriate reference. Overall, the article added significantly to the primary version of the Wikipedia article and enhanced its quality. For sure there is more room for improvement and elaborations on the topic.

Respond to feedback
Thank you so much for the helpful and encouraging feedback.

In terms of adding the picture, I prepared a chart showing the overview of the model procedure and added it to my article :). Thank you for your recommendation.

I tried to find more general information regarding the CLUE scanner section, but I could not find more of the one I added to the article. It is basically the Dyna-CLUE framework implementation in specific software. I do not want to go deeply into the model. my concentration is on the Dyna-clue model. However, I am very thankful that you brought the issue.