User:Serena Chen 009/Weiyang District, Xi'an/Xinya Gong Peer Review

General info
Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Serena%20Chen%20009/Weiyang_District%2C_Xi%27an?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Whose work are you reviewing? : Serena Chen 009

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weiyang_District,_Xi%27an

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Serena, here is my peer review for your article.

Lead

 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?

The new lead has been updated by Serena, which has included an introduction for the sections you have added. You did a great job on adding the brief description and clearly describing the topics you have added in the article. I really like your lead, because it follows the same format as the previous one and adds some simplified Chinese to it to help the reader to have a great understanding of your words.

Content

 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Is the content added up-to-date?

You have added a new section of natural geography under the topic of Weiyang District, which is relevant to the topic and the content is up to date. Also, I found out that you have updated the previous section of administrative divisions, which you have changed to recent data for this topic. Those changes fulfill the editing requirement to contribute to the Wikipedia community.

Tone and Balance

 * Is the content added neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

The content of the natural geography which has been added to the article is in a neutral tone. You have analyzed the climate change for the different seasons and the hydrology in the Weiyang district, which provides great information for the reader to understand the natural geography of this district. Those information did not appear heavily biased toward any particular position instead of stating the information to the readers.

Sources and References

 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Are the sources current? Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors?

I have looked through the sources and references that you have proved in the article which is diverse and reliable. You have contained the sources from the government website, newspaper, and tourism website. Also, you have to contain the sources that are published currently about the Weiyang district. Those different sources make your content full of diversity and credibility.

Organization

 * Is the content added well-written? Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Is the content added well-organized?

The whole content is well-written and well organized, which has been broken down into two main sections with two more subsections. The sections on Climate and hydrology have clearly explained the natural geography of the Weiyang district. The two subsections let the reader easily read the different parts under the section of climate. There are some grammatical errors that I have changed for you in your sandbox draft for the minor change.

Images and Media

 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Are images well-captioned? Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

I saw that you have added an image which is the map of the Xian district. Thus images have enhanced the understanding of the topic by letting the reader know where the Weiyang district is located in the city of Xian. The images are well-captioned by labeling the different districts in numbers. The image is visually appealing by the labels and the different colors for every district.

Overall impressions

 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article? What are the strengths of the content added? How can the content added be improved?

Yes, the article becomes more complete after you added the content and it also improved the overall quality of the article. You did a great job of finding different sources and updating the current information for the content. In my opinion, you can add one more image about the ten different sub-districts in the Weiyang district, which can give the reader an overall picture of the whole district.