User:Serenenn48/sandbox

Evaluation

 * could inform more about how it improves mental health
 * inform more about cardiovascular benefits
 * describing different events for running should have more detail
 * good visuals
 * could add links for products to help with chafing

Article Draft Proposal & Bibliography
For my article edit, I intend to work on the Running article. From what I remember the article was rated a C class so there is more improvement needed. I am proposing to add more information about the stats of different types of runners and the different type of events for running. Also, add more information about the events and how each one works and possibly add the best stat for that specific event. For the history section I would like to change one time because the Tailteann Games had earlier written records between 632 bce and 1171 ec but I'm not sure if that is needed. For injuries I would also add more key injuries that are caused by running for example ITB stands for illiotibial band syndrome which is a type of hip injury from running. It would also be a good idea to search more ways to prevent injuries and or links that could inform someone for injuries. Using my past evaluations I would like to add more information about cardiovascular disease and mental health and how running can help prevent it. I will be using these sources:

Newton, D. E. (2012). Running. In J. L. Longe, The Gale encyclopedia of fitness. Farmington, MI: Gale. Retrieved from http://proxy-iup.klnpa.org/login?url=https://search.credoreference.com/content/entry/galefit/running/0?institutionId=693"

Alic, M. (2012). Mental health and exercise. In J. L. Longe, The Gale encyclopedia of fitness. Farmington, MI: Gale. Retrieved from http://proxy-iup.klnpa.org/login?url=https://search.credoreference.com/content/entry/galefit/mental_health_and_exercise/0?institutionId=693

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Comments from Dr. Vetter
Great proposal, Serena! I think you've done a nice job with identifying specific information like types of runners, types of events, some history, and information on injuries, and responding to injuries. You have a lot of great ideas about information to add, so this is great! great sources! I like the use of the encyclopedia - I'm just wondering if we can find a few other sources to add to this. Check out this resource page http://libraryguides.lib.iup.edu/sb.php?subject_id=9072 and try some other keywords/search terms beyond "running" that that might help you focus on specific additions, for example: "illiotibial band syndrome." Overall great proposal. We'll talk more in our conference. -Dr. Vetter