User:Serenity Siren/Sleep disorder/Madnel4 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Serenity Siren
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Serenity%20Siren/Sleep_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

 * Sleep disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The proposed addition ties into the section well.

The lead section of the article seems a little long.

Should the list of conditions be at the top of the article or bottom??

Some sections seem overdeveloped/ complicated.