User:SethBruder/Psychological resistance/Gabutler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SethBruder


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SethBruder/Psychological_resistance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychological resistance

Evaluate the drafted changes
Since the article was flagged as it might reflect the original writer's personal beliefs, I think there are many ways to go about editing it. I would first start with new sources. I found a definition on the APA website that might be helpful. The section "Handling Resistance in psychotherapy" should be completely revamped to a neutral tone. It uses "you" and just overall is not written well. I would use articles from databases such as Psychinfo to help rewrite it and find any newer topics relating to the subject. Just from a quick google search, a few images popped up that I think could help the article as well. I'm excited to see you future contributions!