User:SethBruder/Psychological resistance/Jacob k 2022 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SethBruder


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SethBruder/Psychological_resistance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychological resistance

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- No lead

-Content

- no content

Tone and balance

- none

sources and references

- none

oraganization

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images

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Impression

-Unfortunately, when opening the Sandbox draft, there seems to be no information worked on. So after looking through the article, I have seen some sections that could be worked on to help improve the article. The first section would be the Psychological resistance section. More information should be found to explain better what psychological resistance is; there is also a note by the citation to further detail. Next, the second section is the Psychoanalytic origins. More information can be provided in this section to help improve the article or bolster the information in this section. For the second citation in this article, you may find a working link to redirect to the page they are talking about. For citations 9 and 10, the links will not take you to the information. Finally, I think it would be better to add some new sections that you think may fit into this article.