User:SethBruder/Psychological resistance/JeTTblxck Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SethBruder


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SethBruder/Psychological_resistance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychological resistance

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You have not included any details or changes in your sandbox. I recommend analyzing the article for areas to expound upon already introduced concepts. One such example could be in the first section describing what psychological resistance reads: "It is established that the common source of resistances and defenses is shame, further its pervasive nature in trans diagnostic roles are identified.", but further explanation is needed to validate this statement so you could find more sources and even add further evidence to back it up. For the origins section of the article, it seems like there could be more to add to give a more description of how it resonated with Freud & psychologists who succeeded him. I believe that this article could benefit from the addition of research based evidence for many of its claims, and the sources that accompany them. From what I've read, I believe there are potentially other aspects of psychological resistance that could be added to give the article more depth. Providing details of research studies done with the proper sources will give the information discussed in the article more validity. Overall, I think any effort put into trying to improve this article could potentially be successful as there is more that could be explicated.